发布时间：2020/03/24 10:34:10 阅读量：4958
在专升本考试中，英语作文写作对于基础较差的同学，永远是一道绕不过去的坎。那么有什么办法可以解决这一部分学子的困扰呢？其实，英语写作除了需要大量的词汇、语法积累之外，还需要多看多读优秀的作文案例：一来是提高英语写作的审美能力，二来可以帮助自己掌握多样化的写作技巧。此次小编就为大家分享两篇专升本英语优秀作文的范文赏析，希望大家能够在阅读过程中，通过分析时态、语法、短语等要素，学有所获。
案例一：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Deal with Sub-health. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
1)现代社会很多人都处于“亚健康”状态；
2)造成“亚健康”的原因；
3)应该如何解决“亚健康”问题。
【思路点拨】
本文属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析导致该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：指出亚健康问题的普遍性及其影响;分析亚健康出现的原因；说明应该如何解决亚健康问题。
【参考范文】
How to Deal with Sub-health
Nowadays, quite a few people are suffering from sub-health. Indeed, sub-health can result in both physical and mental diseases. Even worse, people who suffer from sub-health are more easily to die prematurely.
There are many factors resulting in sub-health. Among these, the pace of modern life plays a vital role. The fast pace of modern life exerts great pressure on people and pressure is the ultimate cause of sub-health. What’s more, modern people spend too much night time working or entertaining, which seriously affects their health.
Considering the great harm brought by sub-health, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to prevent sub-health. Firstly, people must have enough sleep to ensure that they can regain energy and physical strength. Secondly, people should have a rational diet under the instruction of doctor in order to avoid the diseases caused by malnutrition or super-nutrition. Thirdly, people should regularly do some exercise to keep healthy. To conclude, it is necessary for us to take flexible measures to avoid the threat of sub-health.
案例二：
Directions: For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Customers Buy Cut-price Products? You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:
1)现在许多人都喜欢买打折商品；
2)而另一些人认为越是打折的商品越不能买；
3)“我”的看法。
【思路点拨】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和提纲第2点要求提出两种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：指出人们对待打折商品的两种不同态度:可以买打折商品,不应该买打折商品;对比阐述两种态度各自的理由;表明“我”更倾向于哪种态度，并说明理由。
【参考范文】
Should Customers Buy Cut-price Products?
When asked about whether customers should buy cut-price products, different people will offer different views. Some people like to buy cut-price products since a discount is a great appeal. However, others maintain that it’s not a wise and rational idea to buy discount products.
Those people who make the former choice believe they can save themselves a lot of money by buying cut-price products. In addition, they can use less money to buy more products. However, still others do not agree this. In their opinions, the discount is merely a business means of attracting customers and enhancing their desires for purchase. Besides, they argue that the discount always tempts customers to buy something unnecessary.
As to me, I tend to refuse to buy cut-price products. For one thing, complaints about cut-price products rank first in recent days according to the newspapers. For another, cut-price products are usually not provided with an after-sales service, such as three guarantees for products. Considering these, we may reasonably conclude that customers should think carefully when they buy cut-price products.
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